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First reply or auto-reply
The first thing a customer gets back, typed or automatic, before anyone has the answer.
Subject: We’ve got your message ([reference])
Hello [first name],
Thanks for your message. We’ve received it, and someone on the team will read it.
Your reference is [reference]. We’ll reply by [date], sooner if we can.
If you have an order number, photos or anything else that would help, reply to this email and add it to the same conversation.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t write “we’ll get back to you shortly” or “your message is important to us”. Give the date you’ll reply by, then beat it.
Subject: Your refund for [reference] is on its way
Hello [first name],
We’ve approved your refund for [reference].
We’ve sent [amount] back to the payment method you used. Your bank decides how long it takes to show on your statement.
If it isn’t there by [date], reply to this email and we’ll chase it with you.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t promise the day the money lands. You control when you send it; their bank controls when it shows.
Subject: About your refund request for [reference]
Hello [first name],
Thank you for your refund request for [reference].
We’ve looked at it carefully, and we can’t offer a refund this time, because [the reason in one sentence, e.g. the 30-day return window in our terms ended on 2 October].
What we can do instead: [an exchange, a repair or store credit]. If you’d like that, reply to this email by [date] and we’ll arrange it.
If you think we’ve got something wrong, tell us, and someone else on the team will take a second look.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t hide behind “company policy” without saying which rule and why, and don’t suggest they did something wrong. Check your own terms and local consumer law before you say no.
Subject: Your order [reference] is running late
Hello [first name],
Your order [reference] is running later than we told you, and we’re sorry about that.
[What happened, in one plain sentence, e.g. the courier missed Monday’s collection.]
It’s now due to reach you by [date]. We’ll send you the tracking link as soon as it leaves us.
If that’s too late, reply to this email and we’ll [cancel it and refund you in full, or suggest something in stock].
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t blame the courier, a supplier or “high demand” as if that ends it, and don’t give a new date you haven’t checked.
Subject: Putting your order [reference] right
Hello [first name],
Sorry that order [reference] arrived wrong. That’s ours to put right.
We’re sending [the right item / a replacement] today, and it should be with you by [date].
You don’t need to send anything back first. [If you do need it back: we’ll email a prepaid return label.]
If you have a moment, a photo of the item and the box helps us stop it happening again, but it won’t hold up your replacement.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t make them prove it before you help (“please send photos and we will investigate”), and don’t hold the replacement until the return arrives.
Subject: An update on [reference]: one item is out of stock
Hello [first name],
[Item] from your order [reference] is out of stock, and we’re sorry for the wait.
We expect more by [date]. You can choose:
- wait, and we’ll send it the day it arrives
- swap it for [a similar item]
- cancel that item for a full refund
Reply to this email with your choice. If we don’t hear from you, we’ll [what you’ll do by default].
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t give a restock date your supplier hasn’t confirmed, and don’t keep their money for something you can’t send without asking.
07
Complaint about service
They’re unhappy with how they were treated, not with a product.
Subject: Your complaint about [business name] ([reference])
Hello [first name],
Thank you for telling us about this. You expected better, and we’re sorry we fell short.
From what you’ve described, [the problem in your own words, e.g. you waited 40 minutes past your appointment and nobody told you why].
Here’s what we’re doing about it: [what you’ll put right for them], and [what you’re changing so it doesn’t happen to the next person].
I’ll update you by [date]. If I’ve misunderstood anything, reply to this email and tell me.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t argue the facts in your first reply, and don’t write “we apologise for any inconvenience”. Name what went wrong.
Subject: Your message about [reference]
Hello [first name],
I understand why you’re frustrated, and I’m sorry it got this far.
I’ve read your whole message, and I’m handling this myself from now on, so you won’t need to explain it again.
Where it stands: [one or two plain facts]. What happens next: [the action]. You’ll hear from me by [date], whether or not it’s finished.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Answer the problem, not the tone. Leave out “calm down”, “as I said before” and “per our policy”, and don’t copy in a manager to make a point.
Subject: Fixed: [reference]
Hello [first name],
This is now fixed.
[What was wrong, in one sentence], and [what we changed].
[Anything they need to do now, e.g. refresh the page or sign in again. If nothing, say so.]
We’ll keep this open until [date] in case anything else comes up. If it’s still not right on your side, reply to this email.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t write “this should be fixed now”. Check it yourself, then say it is.
Subject: One question about [reference]
Hello [first name],
Thanks for getting in touch. To sort this out, we need a little more information.
Could you send:
1. [the first thing, e.g. the email address you ordered with]
2. [the second thing, e.g. a screenshot of the error]
As soon as we have that, we’ll carry on. If we haven’t heard from you by [date], we’ll check in once more.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Ask for everything in one message, numbered. Don’t ask for anything they’ve already given you.
11
Can’t help: pointing elsewhere
Someone else has to handle it: a bank, a courier, the maker, another department.
Subject: Who can help with [reference]
Hello [first name],
Thanks for your message. This isn’t something we can handle ourselves, but we can tell you who can.
The right people are [who], because [one-line reason, e.g. they hold your payment details]. You can reach them at [link or phone number].
When you contact them, give them your reference [reference] and [anything else they’ll ask for].
If they send you back to us, reply to this email and we’ll contact them ourselves.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t just paste a phone number. Say why it’s them, what to tell them, and what you’ll do if it doesn’t work.
12
Follow-up after no reply
You asked a question or sent a fix, and heard nothing back.
Subject: Checking in on [reference]
Hello [first name],
We haven’t heard back from you, so we’re checking in.
We still need [the one thing you’re waiting for] to finish sorting this out.
If it’s already sorted, or you no longer need help, there’s no need to reply: we’ll close this on [date]. You can reply to this email at any time to pick it up again.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t guilt them with “as per my last email” or “we’ve tried to reach you several times”. Check in once or twice, then close it kindly.
Subject: Closing [reference]
Hello [first name],
We’re closing [reference] now that it’s sorted.
Thank you for your patience while we worked through it.
If anything else comes up, even about this, reply to this email and we’ll pick it straight back up.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t close it without telling them, and don’t make coming back hard. Skip “Is there anything else I can help with?” in the same breath as closing.
14
Apology for our mistake
It was your fault: a wrong charge, a missed booking, a wrong answer.
Subject: Our mistake with [reference], and how we’re fixing it
Hello [first name],
We made a mistake with [reference], and we’re sorry.
What went wrong: [one plain sentence, e.g. we charged you twice for the same order].
What we’ve done: [the repair, e.g. refunded the second payment today]. [Say whether they need to do anything; if not, say so.]
What we’ve changed: [the step that stops it happening again]. I’ll confirm by [date] that it’s all settled.
Best regards,
[your name]
[business name]
Don’t Don’t write “mistakes were made” or “we apologise for any inconvenience”. Say “we” and say what, and skip the long story of how it happened inside the company.